Rainbow Snippets – 5/6/17 – Trustfall

Hello friends! I’m still plugging away at this draft. It is so difficult. I love the characters but I feel like I have no idea where I’m going. I think I’m trying to fit too much into one book. And you know what that means? I MIGHT HAVE TO WRITE A SEQUEL. But I’m not even done with the first draft of the first book! Gah!!! (I certainly love these boys enough to write a sequel with them, though. They’re a lot of fun)

Anyway, picking up where we left off last week (well I skipped like one line for the sake of keeping this at 6… or 7).  Saul and Alex have just met, they’ve realized Saul’s sister Hannah has been talking both of them up to each other, and… here we are.




“Can you grab me a pen and paper?” I asked. If nothing else, he was cute, and it had been a long, long time since I’d been alone with a cute guy. Hannah was certain he was single, and I was reasonably certain he was gay. He stepped away, back to the desk, and grabbed a pen and a sheet of blank paper from the printer. “Write this down,” I said, when he offered them to me. I dictated my phone number and home address. “Tomorrow night at 6, if you’re free.”




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Rainbow Snippets – 4/29/17 – Trustfall

Hi everyone!

I thought up a working title for this piece! I hate it, but it’s better than just calling it “new story” all the time, so we’re going with “trustfall” since a huge part of this novel revolves around trust. I think “trust fall” is actually two words but I’m exercising creative license here and making it one.

Last week, in the first six lines of the novel, POV character Saul was “ogling” a handsome man his sister had told him about. These lines (slightly more than 6, sorry) pick up right after that.




Speaking of my sister… I glanced around, but didn’t see her. Ah well. The man I presumed to be Alex walked around the desk then to head elsewhere, and I caught him with a light touch on his forearm.

“Excuse me.”

He stopped and turned, polite smile in place. “Can I help you?”

“I’m looking for my sister Hannah. Supposed to be picking her up.”

His eyebrows went up and he gave me a quick once-over, taking in my black slacks and tie. “You’re Saul?”

I wasn’t sure what to think of the surprise on his face after that once-over, but I smiled. “Someone’s been talking about me. And I’m willing to bet you’re Alex.”

An adorable reddish flush crept up his cheeks. “Guess someone’s been talking about me, too.”

“She talks a lot.”




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Rainbow Snippets 4/1/17 – Shipwrecked

Hello again, one and all!

This’ll be my last week sharing from Shipwrecked. Camp NaNoWriMo started yesterday and as such I am starting on a new novel. I’m excited about it. I’ve already written a few thousand words, and it is going well. I’m not sure how the plot is going to shake out, but I like the characters, and as a character-driven writer, that’s very important to me.

Anyway, here’s my snippet for the week, picking up right after last week’s. I’ll just leave you guys with blue balls, since I’ve been teasing my way up towards a sex scene for the past few Saturdays and next week I’m switching to a new story. Hehe. Sorrynotsorry.




Thick black curls covered a strong, tan chest, trailing down a flat belly to disappear into the top of his trousers. I’d heard somewhere that if you weren’t sure if you were awake or dreaming that you should pinch yourself. If you feel pain, you’re awake.

I gave my left hand a sharp pinch. It hurt. Belmont glanced at my hand and then met my eyes, questioning me without words.

“I had to make sure I’m not dreaming, sir.”

“Is this something you would dream of?”




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Rainbow Snippets 3/25/17 – Shipwrecked

Hi everyone! I hope the weather is as nice where you are as it is here. I think we’re FINALLY, REALLY, ACTUALLY GETTING SPRING. I bought seed starter trays and seeds and potting soil yesterday. I am ready.

I have lots going on today. I’m going to the zoo with my stepmom to do an “animal encounter”–pretty sure we’re going to pet an otter. I’m psyched.

Then I’m dying my hair purple. Pics will be on Twitter and Facebook (unless I butcher it, then Twitter and FB will be full of “OH GOD I RUINED IT” posts)

This snippet is picking up immediately after last week’s. Morgan followed Captain Belmont to his cabin, where the captain asked, “Do you want something from me?”




“N-no sir.”

“Are you sure?” He took off his hat and set it aside.

“Y-yes sir.”

Belmont smiled. I don’t think I had seen him smile even once, even briefly, in the week I’d been on board. “Watching you work has made me want something from you, though, Morgan.”

“It has?”

He nodded, a smirk still on his face, and pulled his shirt over his head.




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Rainbow Snippets – 3/18/17 – Shipwrecked

Hi everyone! How is everyone doing? I’m not bad. Glad it’s the weekend and ready for warmer weather…

I finished a first draft of this story earlier this week. It ended up being just barely over 6,000 words. It’ll probably get a bit longer after I revise it, but most of the publishers I’ve looked at don’t want anything this short unless it’s for a themed anthology, and I’m not finding any calls for submission that this story would fit. So I’m not sure what to do with it. I could put it up on my blog here, I could self-pub on Amazon I suppose? If anyone has suggestions, I’ll take ’em.

Anyway, this snippet follows right after last week’s. Morgan (POV character) has followed the captain to his cabin. Enjoy. 😉




“What can I do for you, sir?”

“I actually brought you here to see what I can do for you, Morgan.”

“Sir?”

“You spend an awful lot of time looking at me, don’t you? I’m beginning to feel that you have some desire which I am not fulfilling.”

Oh God, he’d noticed.




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Rainbow Snippets – 3/11/17 – New Story

Hello hello! How is everyone doing this fine Rainbow Snippets Saturday?

I’ve started a new short story! A first draft of Jigs and Reels is complete and I’m letting it simmer while I write a first draft of this new story. The plan is basically to just keep leapfrogging stories through writing/editing phases. Write the first one, let it simmer, write a second, edit the first, send it out, write a third, edit the second, send it out, etc… And at some point I need to start editing the novel draft I wrote during NaNoWriMo last November… Ugh, what’s the saying? Got my fingers in too many pots? Too many jars? I don’t know.

Anyway, this new story is something different for me. It’s a historical setting with most of the story taking place on a privateer’s vessel in the 1600s? ish? It’s not going exactly as planned… I came up with the idea around Halloween. I wanted it to be a suspense thing, but of course I am incapable of writing anything that doesn’t involve two men loving each other, so it’s a suspense…. romance… with pirates…? But the “suspense” aspect is difficult for me. I don’t write horror or thrillers or psychological stuff so it’ll need some work. But yay trying new things!

ANYWHO, THE SNIPPET. The POV character is named Morgan. He’s been on the captain’s ship for just under a week. Working title is Shipwrecked.




The captain left the helm and came down the stairs towards me. He wore no shoes—most of us wore no shoes—and his trousers had been rolled up to expose most of his lower leg. Tanned, muscular lower leg with thick black hair. I tried not to stare. There was no privacy at sea and I did not fancy the idea of satisfying my desires tonight in my hammock, surrounded by the rest of the crew.

“Come with me.”




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Rainbow Snippets – 3/4/17 – Jigs and Reels

Good morning, snippet friends, and happy March! Spring is on its way~! I’m starting to clean up my flower beds and get ready to sow seeds towards the end of the month. Right now all my story ideas are based around music, because that’s my current obsession, but as we start to move into spring and summer I’ll likely find myself writing about men who love flowers and keep gardens. There is a distinct lack of flower-loving men in the books I read, so I think I need to write some. I was doing a bit of cleanup a couple weeks ago during a freakish warm spell and got a scene in my head that won’t go away, which involves raking leaves shirtless (and perhaps a nosy neighbor), but I don’t really know where it goes. It’ll have to gestate for a while.

Anyhoo, a few more lines from Jigs and Reels. After agreeing to fill in with the band for the festival weekend, Eli has to go back to work the next day. This is glimpse of his day job and his boss, MaryAnn, talking to his cubicle neighbor Ellen. I went over six lines, I know, but they’re mostly short lines.




MaryAnn waltzed out of her office. She looked like the kind of woman who could be knocked over in a strong wind—“waifish” is the word, I think. Tall, toothpick-thin, with an expression like she’d just popped a handful of extreme sour Warheads into her mouth.

“Ellen, you were six minutes late today. You know the acceptable cut-off is five minutes, right?”

“Yeah, I know,” Ellen sighed. “There was an accident. I had to go around.”

“Oh, that’s fine. Life happens.” MaryAnn smiled brightly. “Just don’t let it happen too much!” And she returned to her office.

“Yeah,” Ellen muttered. “Heaven forbid we let life happen outside this hell hole.”




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